Really pretty game both in style and writing. The TTS voiceover got me out of the experience a bit, Paul's voice sounded a lot more humorous that his script.
Neat experience overall.
I agree that the TTS made it all sound like a big joke, especially around the work relationship, but that supposed comedic undertone made the twist quite more powerful to me. Even if at the beginning I was like "OMG a clicker, let's go", I really liked it at the end, and was clicking like hell in the last moments =]