Yeah I had to restart everything including the prologue and You did quite well on the Prologue part, I mean the previous prologue is good but this one take the cake and you made Maki ( a Little innocent) on the prologue at least when having a conversation with MC but you could've include the HJ scene (on the early version) with her though, but hey im not complaining about that.
Also, i love the transition of MC pupil(eye) from purple to red it's a small detail but this seen as discarding his past self.
Also Chapter 3 is so fcking Funny I had to open my windows to breathe, XD I won't tell just to avoid spoilers.
P.S you have some typos but it's only one letter so it's all good.