Gonna leave short english comment here and more in Bahasa bcs I'm too stupid and just casual VN player ;-;
Straight to point, I love your VN, I love the story, it's beautiful for me. I just found some grammatical error and that's okay. The BGM is good but I think this VN need 2-3 BGM for more feels. And lastly, please use another font. I don't know, I think it didn't suit well.
Saya suka jalan ceritanya. Perkembangan ceritanya yang tidak terlalu terburu-buru dan pas sesuai pace. Mungkin penghalusan di bagian ending cerita. Don't get me wrong the ending really stabbed my heart but I think it can do lot more damage. Juga jangan terlalu banyak merendah dalam sisipan ceritanya. Jangan terlalu banyak menunjukkan bahwa ini dibuat pakai broken english lah atau sebagainya. Tidak masalah tapi cuma jangan terlalu banyak. Kalian masih memiliki banyak potensi. Just be yourself! Ganbatte <3
Animasi dan ilustrasinya sangat bagus. I can't describe Tachibana Mai anymore. She is angel <3 Terima kasih telah memberi saya diabetes diwaktu saya sakit saat ini haha
Terakhir, keep up the good work. Big thanks for you all~