Haha, alright, let's see :)
Alright, first things first, It's already MUCH better than before. It's so much smoother, and these transitions are done beautifully. But there is one thing that broke it for me.
FROM THIS:
TO THIS:
It's just weird, and I don't like it one bit. Other than that, this is a really well done short, and I hope you make more like these!