I absolutely love this game! The dialogue, while it definitely has some small errors here and there, (and I think would be improved with a bit more punctuation,) is really fun, and I love the dynamic between the characters!
The scenes are fun, though I've only done Aiden's route so far, I love how even some sfw moments get full images, they help draw you in.
All in all, would definitely recommend, one of my favorite VNs that I've read. I would donate via patreon, but sadly am broke, so I'll just have to watch and wait for the public builds.