The "oh, that's why" hits unexpectedly hard on Dallan's route. I have many guesses but that wasn't my on list and I wasn't ready for that. Good job on this update. I see a lot of improvement. Very few typos compare to the previous build. Although, there are some wrong dialogue being showed like when it was supposed to be a narration but it shows as someone was saying it and if I remember correctly, there is 1 each for Chelsie and Dallan (I have a memory life span of a baby goldfish so I could be very wrong and yes, I didn't take a screenshot of those errors. I'm so sorry)