Very unique in its approach to the genre. Humorous but well-placed to maintain tension. Interesting but not contrived. Some plot twists are risky but I applaud this! Characters seem well written and interesting so far. Protagonist too, even - rare to see!
Some typos. Dialogue might be from a non-native English-speaker? Very minor gripe and I am extremely picky about this kind of thing.
So sick of seeing the same copy-paste games one after another. Glad I gave this one a shot! Really enjoyed it so far. I'm looking forward to what comes next.