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This is so good!! Just one little thing to point out:


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MC finds his parent's room and runs into the king who has killed them. I chose the option where he finds a sword and stands up to the king stating that he has killed his family. Once Lancelot steps in and saves him, MC asks him if his parent's death is like an illness and if they will stop being dead at some point.

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I find this naivety weird because MC just pointed out that they lost people to killing implying they understand the concept of death. I recommend changing this if they are intended to be naive (which is understandable since they are a young child at this point in time).

Hello, I'm glad you enjoyed it! 💗

It is stated earlier in the prologue that MC doesn't understand what death truly means and you can see throughout the chapter (e.g when MC encounters the dying soldier) that MC is still uncertain on what death looks like. They know the word death but not what it truly means except the fact once people die you can't interact with them. It's almost like an illness in their head, something that can be treated before it's too late.

I hope that made sense, if not let me know! Maybe I should add something like the above in the prologue so it doesn't seem strange. 😅