There are some typos in the PDF (not egregious or changing the meaning, but noticeable), and I think some sketches depicting some of the given scenario or characters would be nice, but I SUPER enjoy the setting given and how it's written.
for some reason i thought Briton was like
the name for historical britan.
If you don't mind, what other typos are there? Cause Gdocs isn't picking them up beyond it wrongly telling my how to spell faeries.
