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This was a FANTASTIC game. I love the aesthetic and the art style is perfect! However, this game needs some SERIOUS work on the dialogue!! It spends the first 5 minutes boasting about the grammatical errors being fixed and yet, this game is littered with horrific English. I had so much trouble reading what should've been a simple sentences. I will work for free to help fix this simply so others do not have to suffer the same fate!!

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Thank you :D, I really need to find proof readers and editorial next time. But thank you that you tolerated the game's grammatical hell and still enjoying it!

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