ETHERNALBLOODSPlatTERGENOCIDE!!HEARTFATALFlutteringWITHBUTTERFLIES!Thank you for a constructive comment! I'll try your suggestion next time. For me a non native speaker. Seeking for a helping hands or team on writing sounds very logical.
I think it should be easy to recruit one or two native speakers to proof read stuff for your next game :3