The only real issue I'd say I have is THERE ISN'T ANYMORE THAN THE PROLOGUE! But really, so far this game has a really strong start; great art (some of the details could use a little clean up, but otherwise the colors are STUNNING), intriguing characters and an already engaging story-line.
The only real critiques I'd give are mostly some spelling and grammar errors (minimal) and I think there are a couple times the text gets cut off? Otherwise, for a game still in development, you have me hooked and waiting for more!