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The main character is not presented as perfect. There are many things they have been shown to not know. Not only that, but they have several flaws if you look closely and pay attention. Having been a part of this world for a long time, it would make sense for them to have knowledge on some things that the reader doesnt.

I really do tire of this one-sided conversation. You made a valid point with the synopsis of the game being a bit misleading. That's completely my fault and it was entirely by mistake. It will be fixed in the future and you have nothing to worry about in that regard.

However, your review and analysis of the story and it's characters is interesting, yet inaccurate in some areas. This isn't your fault because the story isn't finished entirely. We're not even close to the end of it.

Nobody wants to see someone come in here and say a story is "Just Adastra, but (insert slight difference here)". Only I can confirm this right now, but I can assure you this story will be nothing like Adastra by the time it is finished. My inspiration comes from classic medieval fantasy stories and several historic events.

I'm sorry there's no routes. I'm sorry there's not any other romance options. I'm sorry you were mislead going into this, but some of the stuff you assumed wasn't even hinted at in the description. "It would have been cool if this..." or "It would have been cool if that...". Yes, I'm sure it would be very neat, but whether it happens or not is up to me. I write this story for myself, not just to appease people online.

I really do tire of this debate. I won't be responding to further messages. Plans to change the description of the novel were already being put in place. In conclusion, your problem will be solved. Thank you for your input.

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I never meant they were flawless when saying "perfect". I was implying how they were knowledgeable, competent in their field, and usually had control of any conversation they were a part of. Not to mention being considered very handsome. They have very few flaws, I understand they aren't unflawed completely, but they are pretty darn close. There are often some biases people have as writers that they don’t realize in their work.

I apologize the conversation is tiresome for you; If I didn't care about the success of your work, I wouldn't be passionate enough to write so much. We are harder on the things we care about the most and strive to see them grow and become something better. Not every fan can be a “yes-man.”

You can’t blame me for my Adastra comparison. You are a human in a foreign land (check) who quickly falls into a one-route romance with a himbo wolfman (check), have a connection to the creator god of your respective world (check), find yourself at the opposite end of a rude princes ire (check), and an outwardly kind foreign dignitary feline who is rather deceitful and clearly has their own hidden agenda (check). I’m sorry you don’t like it, but the signs are all there.

I’m fine if there aren’t any routes, if it’s meant to be a simple non-branching narrative that’s what it’s meant to be. But, based off past comments, with how it was advertised, I’m not the only person who assumed there would be other routes. I thank you for confirming that things will be corrected, and I look forward to seeing how the story evolves as I certainly am more enamored with your world over that of other visual novels. I greatly appreciate well-done worldbuilding. You do a rather good job at driving my curiosity to see how your vision ends, especially since endings is what a lot of VNs tend to fall short at.