Wow. This sure is a good beggining. I like the story, even tho we didn't see much of it. This universe is amazing, made me think of "rusty punk" even tho it's not the same context at all.
The characters are endearing, and i want to know them better, but i'm afraid this will go too quick in the NSFW. I hope we'll get to see more before that. The artwork is so funny, i love it :)
Anyway, nice VN, i'll look forward to the futur updates ! Thanks for creating this vn, keep going ! :D