First off absolutely love the story. The writing is wonderful and i am so glad when i started following this project last year i actually got a update notification because God knows how rare that is in the interactive novel community where stories are just dumped like a bad one night stand. I digress tho. Thank u for amazing writing and i am so excited for more of it.
I did want to mention what might be a bug. I don't know but I've restarted the game twice now because i set my characters pronouns and when i check them as soon as the opening writing starts it's perfect but as soon as we get introduced to Kalan it's somehow back to being They/Them which isn't something I'm personally comfortable with. I don't know if that's just a default or what. But i will go restart again. Maybe i just fucked up customization lol