As this game is still very early in development Im not going to nitpick too much. The overall feel/atmosphere of the game is already good, its surprisingly effective given how little there is to the game so far. All the controls and movement felt quite rigid, would be nice to see more polish here in the future. Her mixamo dance was quite nice, no need to apologies. I'm not a big fan of the dialog system, it wasn't clear to me that you had to press the up down movement buttons to select the different options, might be nice to show the cursor during dialog option selection.
Overall the concept is interesting, will try it again next demo day submission!