Hi Runey, I'm a newcomer but I have 2 suggestions. (1) Ashley's 9/9 lust scene is clearly a midnight event so it should run before "alarm clock" scenes, & (2) when Maria is recovered, the collar should be removed immediately after returning to the hotel (or during the ride home even) because presumably the PC gets the key
If there's a better place for me mention similar things, please let me know :/