I enjoyed reading this story. It proposes an alternative fantasy universe with a 1920s aesthetic but with city states and demons. Given that it is connected to the author's other works, it would probably be wise to read those as well to gain a deeper understanding of this world.

As I've seen in his other works, the background collages and illustrations are simply outstanding. The literature is more than accurate, despite the fact that I occasionally think some of the texts are a little too long. Although it is understandable in a work of more than 30,000 words intended for a one-month game jam, I felt the ending was a little hurried.

Overall, I thought it was good, and I'm excited to read more from the same author and learn more about this world.

In place of reporting them here, if the author is interested, I can send him or her a private message with the errors and bugs I found in the text (which aren't too serious).