Great Novel! Loved it and will support on Patreon! I did have some issues where at times the game "world" felt dead. Like on this campus there were only a couple of people there with no other activities going on. The only issue I had with the game because the story had me intrigued for about 8 hours straight! Thanks for the great novel!
Thanks for the love. Yeah, it has felt dead since day one. the problem is that adding multiple people to the scene was too intense for my old computer. I've upgraded since with the Patreon support and I can do more now than before. Problem is that it would just seem weird to add a litany of students into the frames mid-game so I"ve kinda avoided adding it in this edition. If you're not aware, this is still the rough draft. When completed. I'll go back through with everything I've learned and reformat things.