Honestly, the barrier to entry is too high. I spent half an hour in the game and its still entirely internal monologue about mundane stuff. Just the main character talking about how awesome they are at everything and a bunch of useless information on a variety of subjects. Theres like 6 paragraphs about coffee. It could really use alot of trimming.
It is slightly dense, but Zach is the narrator of the game and that's just how he thinks and talks. He's also not awesome at everything. He's largely puffing himself up with his few genuine skills to feel better because he's lonely and miserable and how much he wishes he wasn't the way he is.
The Awkwardness stat shortens the narration and makes the overall game less verbose, so consider cranking that to 1 or 2 for a more "streamlined" read (even if this game's character is how excessively you get inside Zach's head).