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Loved the demo!

A topic by pk__chim created Dec 27, 2022 Views: 147 Replies: 2
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I guess I chose a good time to jump in. Just discovered the game a few days ago and saw that a new demo just released which was nice.

Really enjoyed the characters. I expected albie to just feel like a "side" character, and he is, but he's got a surprising amount of depth to him too. I love grace's snarky passive aggressiveness. Stuart is cool, there's less to say about him but that's fine honestly. he's like, Normal in a game where everyone's quirky in some way or another.

As for the main three: they are all so likable, god.  It's interesting that Syd likes Steph, and i found myself thinking "do i want to make choices as to who I would want to end up with? Or for what Syd wants?". It's interesting because Syd and Maisy obviously (to me at least) had the best synergy! But then Syd is super in love with Steph...or IS he? Maybe he just enjoys her looks? They've barely talked until the events of the game, you know—how do we know they're really a good fit for each other?  And am I really gonna ignore Jayda? She likes Syd! If I try to "play matchmaker" for Syd by setting him up with Steph, I'm just letting down Jayda aren't I? She's not the MC, but isn't she as much of a character as Syd is??? Aaah!!

In the end, I just tried by best to spend equal amounts of time with each of them. I knew there'd be a tradeoff (less deep friendships for each), but I just never liked the idea of leaving any of them hanging for too long. Doing it like this could give Syd the most amount of options....hopefully.

Other miscellaneous thoughts I had while playing included "I could hang out with Steph the most, but she might think I'm trying too hard".

"I could hang out with Maisy the most but there's a similar problem, especially since Nacho exists. Don't want Maisy to think Syd's in love, or for Syd to fall in love while Maisy's in a relationship—both could be bad"

"I could hang out with Jayda the most, but what if she becomes too dependent on Syd? She always immediately replies to the texts when he texts her? hmm..."

"It's really hard to know which choice is the best here???" (there usually wasn't a best choice, which is good!)

"Uh oh, Steph's hyping up the second book...I bet Syd's not gonna like it and i'm gonna have to choose between lying or not (didn't progress w/her enough to find out if this was true)"

"Otherworld is interesting but if there's that many seasons, I dunno if i'll finish it. Is it worth? Maybe I'll just focus on the book, since Maisy seems to already have a lot of things to talk about"

Other stuff:

• For some reason the joke that got me the most was "protestants vs catholics sounds like a fighting game"

• I guess i have a question; At times where you can choose a character to hang out with, but they brush you off like "oh, sorry but I'm busy today". Does that still improve Syd's relationship with them a tiny bit? Like, you at least thought to ask them?

• The ending survey: I thought it was pretty accurate. Was a little sad that I couldn't connect more with Steph, but that's also just the choice I made.

For these next three, they're definitely easier said than done, but here are some things i think could've been improved:

• I do think it'd be a nice if there were some more backgrounds, or like, alternate angles of the places we know. But that could also be hard to do if the current backgrounds are stock photos. Like "stock photo of house interior" works on its own, but then it'd be hard to show any alternate angles unless they're included in the same stock photo...set? (idk how stock photos work). 

• Of course all of the lines can't be voiced (logistics w/the voice actors and all). But it'd be cool if there were short, generic voicelines a la FE Awakening. Like If Jayda's happy on a line of dialogue she could say "Yippee!". I felt like I forgot some of the characters voices sometimes, which isn't the end of the world, but still.

It could get annoying for some people cuz there's a lot of text in the story, so it'd probably have to be less frequent than what you'd hear in a FE support conversation. And there could always be an on/off option for it in the settings.

• And then, I think it'd be cool if there was art of Syd relaxing on his bed watching TV, & Syd lying on his bed with a book, to spice up those two events. The presentation on those felt a bit lacking, since it was the same bedroom.jpg the whole time, and you end up doing these events pretty frequently.

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• Maybe it's just me but I made a TON of saves. Due to the nature of the game, I kept sorta peeking at options to see a few lines of dialogue, then resetting to see the other option. I exhausted, let's see...13 pages of saves!...yeah lol. I was a bit confused by the page count since it doesn't go past 9—it'd be nice if the left and right keys scrolled the numbers shown at the bottom.

• There is...a huge amount of content in this game, it seems. Wait, the steam page says 2023? Can it really be completed by then if only 2 of the weeks are done so far?? I guess a lot of the systems are in place by now though.

It's gonna be so interesting replaying this game. I'm a bit tired right now cuz I just binged it and wrote a long ass comment, but i'll probably go back and try gearing my options toward each of the heroines and seeing how it plays out.


Anyways, yeah. Long comment, so don't feel pressured to respond to it all. Looking forward to the next release!

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Hey there! Thank you so much for playing LoveSick Darlings! I'm especially happy to hear you're a player who got try out the latest version of the demo, and it left enough of a good impression for you to make this post! Thank you so much for taking the time to write to me - and to leave such detailed thoughts! I really appreciate it.

Your struggle "playing matchmaker" for Syd is exactly my intention when making this game! Doing what Syd wants, what the others want from him, and what YOU the player want for all the characters is a delicate balance! I'm glad you think Maisy and Syd have the best synergy though. I really worked hard to make their friendship believable and real. In fact, their synergy is so high someone might even think those two are perhaps even better just as friends...? There's one extra layer of difficulty for you hahah!

"What if Maisy falls for Syd while dating Nacho?" "What if Jayda becomes dependent on Syd?" "What if Steph thinks Syd is trying too hard?" are all thoughts I wanted to stir in the player! I want the player to have just as much social anxiety about these three friends as Syd does haha! I'm genuinely happy to hear these thoughts are in your head as you play. As cruel as it sounds, it tells me that I'm doing something right. Thank you for sharing, really!

To answer your question: being brushed off doesn't raise your relationship, unfortunately! At least... 99% of the time. There's one or two instances where a character will thank you for asking to hang out, even if they aren't available. Those gives a small amount of points.

Regarding your suggestions:
- I agree. It'd be nice to have more backgrounds. I've been thinking about investing in a stock photo pack just for interior homes. But we'll see, no promises!
- I did consider doing this style of voice-acting, in a similar way to FE Awakening but... personally, I found the voice quips in Awakening to be a bit distracting and even take away from certain scenes when they weren't implemented right so I avoided them for LoveSick Darlings. Then if I instead used them sparsely, they might catch people off-guard and also take away from scenes. It'd be a delicate balance if I did such a thing! I'll take the suggestion on board at least though! It'd add a bit of life to the giant chunks of text at least.
- That's actually SUCH a good idea, damn! How did I never think of that?! Aw man... I might actually do this. Or at least try my best to. The artists of this project have moved on to new endeavours, but I'll see what I can do. As that'd be a great way to fill those scenes with something to look at! Instead of "bed.jpg" as you said haha!
- I never considered I'd need more pages for saves! I might update the UI to show additional pages! I can imagine over multiple playthroughs, the saves would fill up fast...

Thanks so much for your input!

Regarding the size of the game.... this game is absolutely monstrous. I've created a beast and I'm doing my best to tame it, haha! The game is currently at 800K words. I'm writing the final week of the game currently. In fact, there is a closed Beta for Kickstarter backers that covers most of the game and the feedback has been positive so far. So rest assured, the game IS coming along! But slowly. 2023 is the goal, and I really hope it's ready by then!

In any case, I hope you enjoy continuing to explore the demo! I hope it's fun!

And that's the end of my long reply back to you! I hope it wasn't too boring or wordy! I can literally talk about this game all day. Thanks once again for playing and sharing!

PS: I especially loved that you called Stuart "normal" - you're probably the first person to call him that! Most players call him a bit odd or weird hahaha. But maybe compared to the rest of her cast he's a different kind of "normal" hahah! I'm also glad you liked Albie too. He was originally a very simple character, but giving him depth over the updates has been an unexpected treat! This is the case for most side characters haha!

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You're welcome! Don't worry, the response isn't too long or anything like that.

• Maisy and Syd being better as friends: that's true too...huh maybe 

• I was thinking like, the consequences feel stressful in the moment, but that's exactly what made it compelling for me. I'm not super into visual novels so i don't know how often  they do stuff like "relationships with consequences" , but i like it in this game.

•About the awakening-style VA, that makes sense. I do imagine it'd be hard to balance, yeah. Nice to hear that you liked the 3rd suggestion though!

• Ooh, okay. For some reason i just assumed that the demo was all that was completed so far, but i forgot that that's...not necessarily how it works lol. That's nice to hear. 

Either way, good luck! :)