What a fantastic start. I absolutely love it so far. Im so happy to finally see tasteful femdom on a VN, that's not just violence, abuse, or cucking.
like others have said, it could be less of a grind. Make gift items a little cheaper, make grades more persistent, maybe give us more time in the day, to give most of the girls enough attention, and still be able to get important stuff done.
Also, please allow us to give Natalie all three books.
It would also be nice if we could assign girls roles in the club on a timer, or have a visual cue, that would show their stress, so it's not so easy to forget that they've been doing a job for five days.
Loving the scenes and kinks, so far, especially Cindy, her scenes caught me off guard in the best way. She immediately became my favorite character. It would be nice if there were a path, where she could mentor Natalie or another dominant girl, or make both of you submit. Either way, i really want to see more of her.
I love that you subverted expectations with hermione, by making Natalie the witch.
Im really looking forward to seeing this VN finished, and ill definitely support you on patreon.