Hey there!
Sorry for taking so long to get back to you, the last week has been quite hectic lmao..
Thanks so much for giving me such a detailed review on my project- honestly, it means a lot for me. I'm constantly trying to improve, so your view really helps.
Everything you have said has been taken into account and will be applied where it should be, though some points I can't really touch because, the way the story has been thought out by me, some things are supposed to not make sense, or seem unnecessary, or whatnot. Things are yet to happen, so links will be made way later on. If you stick around until the end of it, I'd love to see your review then again :)) .
But yeah, thanks a lot, and I'll see what I can do <33