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Hello. I tried my best not to adjust anything on the face and mouth if need be. I can go back and readjust. I added a front hairpiece and highlights. I changed up the outfit. I wasn't sure if I should change the eye color or not. I kept what eye color you had originally

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hm 3 out of ten, i love the eyes, the colours of the outfit are nice however, the combination of the hair and skirt combo is horrible (dw im just being harsh  its not that bad , THE HAIR NEEDS ALOT OF IMPROVMENT BUT THE MAIN THING TO FOCUS ON IS THE SKIRT) also isnt she at the beach, why does the top of her swimsuit have a hoodie part, i forgot how its called also i dont really like the shoes,the nose, and the flowers accesory, the flower mouth is fine idk i like it alot for some reasons, also i would personally remove the glasses or either make them a little smaller and (maybe) put them on top of her head, thats it also dont get offended this is just for fun ^^ (Extra, i would add a detailed nose, remove the eyes highlight, give her a customized and detailed color pallete, remove the eyes highlight, make the eyes detailed, change the hair, change the color to a fresher one, give the hair highlight and make the oc way more detailed)

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Honestly, no worries. I could improve on a lot of things. This sort of feedback helps a lot. I will try my best to incorporate a lot more details next time

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tysm! I was scared you would get mad so thats a relief

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Of course not. I have always struggled to make original OCS. So any feedback is always much appreciated (●´ω`●