Thank you for the review! I'm always looking for feedback. Thankfully since I'm tackling this in a VN fashion rather than a comic, I've had a bit more time to ruminate on what I want the story to be and the direction of it all (plus learning from past mistakes). I also don't have to focus on all the elements that go into comics. I'm sure I'll fumble a bit, but I have a pretty good idea in mind of where it's heading.
For Backgrounds- do you have any, in particular, you didn't like or liked? All of them are drawn by me, and admittedly, I'm no BG artist; But I'm certainly taking this project as a way to learn!
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Mostly the one in the apartment, it looks a bit too desolate, partially due to the lack of color, but also because of how unnervingly symmetrical it looks, with all the rectangles and sharp edges. If the intent was to portray the emptiness of it, since Howl is moving or smth else, it's mostly alright as is. That being said, I'm happy to see your approach to the VN genre, I hope you'll get to enjoy and learn even more from it in the future, happy to see more of your stories and characters 😀