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I was promised wholesome and cute and thats exactly what i got, you did a amazing job, I even played the short 5 minutes part (i hope it is a teaser for a bigger project :3).

I really like the tone of the story, you manage to immerse the reader by making the main protagonist relatable and kind of shy and quirky, his chemistry with Dawn is adorable and it makes playing the game a really lighthearted and fun experience.

I also like that you didnt put bad endings or mean decisions in the game, i'm not against suffering the consequences for your actions in a visual novel but it is kinda sad when i have to choose the bad decisions to finish a game100% XD.

Again, nice job! Hope you have more prepared for us : D

VNAnon1 year ago(+1)

Thanks, friend <3 Glad you liked it.

Yeah I hear a lot about bad ends and how visual novels are all supposed to have them but it's just not what I was going for, this is happy happy fantasy fulfillment and everything goes perfect, Dawn loves you too much for there to be bad ends.

It's not like I haven't thought up a whole Unova adventure with Dawn but these things really take a lot more work and money than I expected. I can see making a sequel but the fact that I've taken over a year to make anything since this and it's turning out even shorter makes me wonder how long it'll be. Maybe when everyone's forgotten about it I'll come out with something.

And since the MC is a self-insert I'll take this as "I would be a perfect boyfriend for Dawn", so thank you and I agree.

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