Thank you very much!
I find it challenging to write natural-sounding dialogue and engaging narratives in English, but I will do my best to improve it in the future.
I'll look into Divine Dawn, I should play and read more to improve!
Thank you for the response!
Given that there's obviously this much passion behind this project, I think you will find that the characters almost write themselves at some point in the future. I might not speak for everyone here but I think it's great if you can get to know them on a mental level at least as much as a physical one.
Cheers!