Must say that artwork and story is lovely but i can clearly see that english isn't your first language and i thought reading it could give me stroke. so one of the most important things is to have someone to correct your mistakes. By now i only played till the world map to check out the menu and be able to save because near half an hour intro is in my opinion pretty long. I checked out the menu and you did very good job with how it feels. I'm looking forward to play more of it and hopes it'll become more popular. Good luck
Thank you for your honest opinion, and yeah I'm not a native english speaker. And because I'm soloing this and in low budget I still can't hire to help me fix the text. But I realized there some strange in my writing so in next update I'll try to shorten the text to reduce the time consuming and also to make sure everyone will understand at least. 😅
yup just wanted to say the intro was suuuuuuuper long, I liked it so far but man man just clicking Z to read for that long was tough, I wanted to start doing things within the first 10 minutes at most. Also not being able to save midway through the intro was killer. Even if it's little things like walking down the stairs or following the princess or guards etc, you should allow the player to move themselves. Also recommend putting little hidden secrets in the world map. https://www.grammarly.com/grammar-check this would be a good tool to use if you want to check your spelling/grammar.
Thank you so much and yeah for that matter I already made so much changes, and one of them is add skip for the intro ^^. For the secret I already prepare that, like there will be secret missions in a secret places or something. But making moveable during certain scene also nice suggestion and I'll consider it.
Also thank you for the grammar correction suggestion that will really help me alot >.<