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So I'm just here to provide feedback and I honestly am really into the storyline. I chose the coach for the first time accidentally since I was only trying to be nice and I didn't know that was the start of an arc. I restarted and tried to find Darius and I would say that the writing on his part is really well done.

I may sound biased but I felt connected to Darius in a really strange way and it made me come back to playing the piano; the final trigger was on the part where he played Bach's Prelude on C major (I've been playing it ever since I've heard of it. It's sad and somehow bittersweet and it made me think that he was getting happier ever since he met the mc). The writing on him really made me feel something different and I honestly feel really melancholic about him. I guess I'm actually kind of obsessed in a way (but not to the point of getting angry at him and turning into some silly psycho guy like some zebra here). I can feel his sadness through his music and I can relate to him in some way. I tried Spencer's path to relieve some of the heartache I feel for Darius but I felt really guilty after trying to do that (there's  been something seriously wrong with me ever since I've encountered Darius). Thank you so much for making this and keeping it free for the public! I really want to give money to you to help you out but I'm honestly really poor like the mc lol. 

Thank you and nice job! (I made an itch.io account just to tell you this lmao ty again for this piece of art aaaAAAAAHHH ok bye)


P.S.

Spencer would've been the bae if I didn't read Darius' storyline first ( now im just really loyal and im staying to the end u dang lion) and I knew beforehand that he was crushing on the mc. Aaaaahh thats all

P.P.S.

I don't know why I had to add that post script there but okay. Guess it's proof of how much i like the novel aaaAAAAAHh