Hroft32, just wondering if this vn has been put on hiatus? I really enjoyed the read, even if there were some little pieces that could use a little ironing out.
Way too many unnecessary descriptions, literally every line of direct speech is followed by three whole paragraphs of protagonist's thoughts and descriptions of surroundings. And to top it off, all characters are overly verbose and speak with too much pathos.
It wouldn't be a problem, but the VN also has timed responses and disabled rollback. That's just plain rude. I'll decide how I want to play. And if I don't get to decide - I just won't play.
Dropped and advise everyone against playing. This VN is a bad read and it doesn't respect your time.
Overbose and too wordy? Indeed. But cheap poetry? No!
Honestly, I like how the author construct those sentences. The fact that English is not the developers' main language makes the story description sounds unique. It's an achievement on its own!
Then, about what everyone complained: too wordy. In my opinion, the problem is not the wordy itself, but more into the words' smithing.
There are some description that seems unnecessary because they have nothing to do directly with the main character. Some of them also sounds a bit off because not properly inflicts a certain mood in a certain situation.
Too much information make me forgot why and what the main character do in the place and how's the atmosphere (mood) in there.
There's ways to make sentences sound poetic without being too wordy.
Or maybe this way of storytelling is just not my cup of tea? I'm not sure.
But for sure, the developers give this VN great efforts and we must appreciate it!
Don't you agree that this is an amazing VN because of the interactive stories with interesting world-building and characters?!
Does this VN has a Discord group or maybe the author has a Twitter? All I've found is FA and something called VK, but I'm not registered on any of that
Is anyone else having trouble starting to play the game? I'm playing on android, and when I change the language, it just boots me out the game. Is it on my end or the games?
The game is great! I really enjoy staying with these characters and I find Gunn quite hot~ . Anyway, i really want to see more of this and i hope you guys keep working on this fantastic VN!
I think I'm ok with the long texts of MC's thoughts. You are good at telling stories. And I do find myself a bit sad when finishing the latest update, cuz I have to say goodbye to those friends I made during the adventure.
Played trough it and one of the biggest issues this vn has is that its overlyverbose. And its YIIK levels of overbose! The main character will go on and on with unecessary descriptions and cheap poetry instead of moving the plot foward,few things narrated by him actually matters wich made playing trough this visual novel a slog. If the unecessary dialogue and cheap poetry was teared down it would help out a lot
were you choose your character and clothes before you start the game. It has an option to hide the cloths but the underwear is still there. Wish there was an option to make him completely nude and all others in the game.
Hey, uh... I'm not sure if I did it wrong but I started the game and it's in Russian. Is that supposed to happen? I'm on Mac and I am using the Itch.io Launcher, just for reference.
it coulda been a better vn, i swear, only bc there are too many texts all at once in the beginning that are unfavorable for reading and progressing... :(
a month ago, the author wrote that the update was 80% complete and he only needed to finish the backgrounds and translate into English. So we are waiting for great news.
So I am a bit confused. Last couple times I've tried to play through it, I attempted to create a more brawler oriented character. I ended up with Gunn as travel companion and some reason our character comes off way to passive/soft on that route despite the means of getting on it involves 'succeeding' in a fight. Is that intended? Also there is some weirdness where when you wake up in the car it'll mention your character having burns if they didn't even go into the fire, but fought the wolf instead.
The burn and fight situation, that's a really good note. I missed it, already fixed and will be in the next update. It's normal for Gunn to be more gentle, he's not a bad character, but he has trouble holding back his anger. This will show up later. Thanks for the feedback.
Yeh Gunn is fine, just meant with how the interactions are with our character and other characters like the rabbit. Kinda ends up sounding like our character forgot the hardness and survival instincts that they was first mentioned as having in opening scene as part of living in that world. Not sure if that was intended or not though. Possible there is story elements to explain it that I haven't seen or I didn't pick up on. Or maybe I am misinterpreting/thinking about it the wrong way? Anyways Thanks Glad the bit though about the fire was helpful. I hope my asking this was ok
Hello Kotik. You are my favorite subscriber :D The update will not be soon... I have some text. But the game will again be divided into 2 parts. I would not want to release one part, leaving the second completely empty. I can tell you inside. The game will have a casino and a minigame, based on the player's intelligence. I think it's pretty fun.
About donations. I can only say that I am a terrible and irresponsible manager. I don't know how to advertise and manage money. The person who helped me with the patreon, convinced me to create it and helped lead it, left me.
Oh, that's great to hear! :3 (Hehe, I'm favorite) It's okay, I will wait until the end of times. Yeeeeah, my smart-ass dog finally will able to use his gigantic brain to his full potential with that Minigame
Ouch... Sad to hear that, but you can try on your own, it's can be a great experience for the future. If I remember correctly, it's not that hard, especially "boosty". I can ask my friends about it if you need. (And to be fair, I really don't go support for special content, it's great bonus and all, but main reason - helping out projects that I find interesting and promising)
I love this ! I want to see how it ends so badly ! The characters are well designed, their personalities too, which make this game amazing ! The fact that there is still some action needed in the keyboard is also very nice. I don't see that so often, so it's always a pleasur to see that you can still interact with the game. Plus there is choices that matters, in a way. So yes, i enjoyed the game, and i can't wait to see the next update !
Is there any discord, patreon, or ko-fi account in which i could support the game ?
Thanks you for your amazing work, and don't give up !
Hello. Try opening the hidden menu. This is an arrow. To the left of the portrait and to the right of the text. For some reason I can't attach a picture.
Oh yeah thanks!, is it just me that i can't enter my name anymore? Cause the first time i can enter the name, but i couldn't enter the name on the second time.
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why do I always die at the motel
If someone still have a problem with the language just go to настройки (settings) and on the right side you have язык (language), select english.
Thank you so much I thought I was not gonna be able to play
Congrats on finishing!! Thank you for giving us an amazing story and art <3
I'm glad this project got an ending, thank you for sharing your work!
finall is out and The author is going to update nsfw Scenes with art as well as bug fixes.
https://hroft32.itch.io/rusty-punk/devlog/540724/final-version
Is this NSFW?
https://hroft32.itch.io/rusty-punk/devlog/540724/final-version
Hroft32, just wondering if this vn has been put on hiatus? I really enjoyed the read, even if there were some little pieces that could use a little ironing out.
https://hroft32.itch.io/rusty-punk/devlog/540724/final-version
How do I access the english translation of the game?
Way too many unnecessary descriptions, literally every line of direct speech is followed by three whole paragraphs of protagonist's thoughts and descriptions of surroundings. And to top it off, all characters are overly verbose and speak with too much pathos.
It wouldn't be a problem, but the VN also has timed responses and disabled rollback. That's just plain rude. I'll decide how I want to play. And if I don't get to decide - I just won't play.
Dropped and advise everyone against playing. This VN is a bad read and it doesn't respect your time.
Or you're just insanely impatient.
Is this game finished or unfinished
https://hroft32.itch.io/rusty-punk/devlog/540724/final-version
Overbose and too wordy? Indeed. But cheap poetry? No!
Honestly, I like how the author construct those sentences. The fact that English is not the developers' main language makes the story description sounds unique. It's an achievement on its own!
Then, about what everyone complained: too wordy. In my opinion, the problem is not the wordy itself, but more into the words' smithing.
There are some description that seems unnecessary because they have nothing to do directly with the main character. Some of them also sounds a bit off because not properly inflicts a certain mood in a certain situation.
Too much information make me forgot why and what the main character do in the place and how's the atmosphere (mood) in there.
There's ways to make sentences sound poetic without being too wordy.
Or maybe this way of storytelling is just not my cup of tea? I'm not sure.
But for sure, the developers give this VN great efforts and we must appreciate it!
Don't you agree that this is an amazing VN because of the interactive stories with interesting world-building and characters?!
Looking for the next update!
To call this vn amazing is an offense. If anything its more of a slogfest that is painful to read and accompany
Your downvotes say otherwise.
Does this VN has a Discord group or maybe the author has a Twitter? All I've found is FA and something called VK, but I'm not registered on any of that
Is anyone else having trouble starting to play the game? I'm playing on android, and when I change the language, it just boots me out the game. Is it on my end or the games?
The game is great! I really enjoy staying with these characters and I find Gunn quite hot~ . Anyway, i really want to see more of this and i hope you guys keep working on this fantastic VN!
I think I'm ok with the long texts of MC's thoughts. You are good at telling stories. And I do find myself a bit sad when finishing the latest update, cuz I have to say goodbye to those friends I made during the adventure.
Played trough it and one of the biggest issues this vn has is that its overlyverbose. And its YIIK levels of overbose! The main character will go on and on with unecessary descriptions and cheap poetry instead of moving the plot foward,few things narrated by him actually matters wich made playing trough this visual novel a slog. If the unecessary dialogue and cheap poetry was teared down it would help out a lot
He will there be an option to hide the underwear or go completely nude in the game? Just curious lol. I love nudist games.
Heh, which character are you referring to?
were you choose your character and clothes before you start the game. It has an option to hide the cloths but the underwear is still there. Wish there was an option to make him completely nude and all others in the game.
Hey, uh... I'm not sure if I did it wrong but I started the game and it's in Russian. Is that supposed to happen? I'm on Mac and I am using the Itch.io Launcher, just for reference.
The third option down is Preferences and once you click on it you can change the language to English in that menu.
Awesome, thanks. I was wondering the same, glad I looked for advise.
it coulda been a better vn, i swear, only bc there are too many texts all at once in the beginning that are unfavorable for reading and progressing... :(
Yes!!! New update, I love your game!
Thanks a lot! ❤
I really like this visual novel, probably a dumb question but was the android link updated too?
( it appears as 2.1B when you try to download it )
Yes, I just named the file incorrectly. Content updated
okay, thank you
i need to start playing this more
Wow I'm early finally an update, i thought this vn is dead, but looks like it's not, times to replay the vn again
The style of the whole novel looks cool and the characters too! I'll be waiting for the next updates
I really enjoyed playing this a few months ago. I hope that it isn't abandoned. Any news?
a month ago, the author wrote that the update was 80% complete and he only needed to finish the backgrounds and translate into English. So we are waiting for great news.
That IS good news. Thank you!
An update!
Игра действительно затягивает. Интересные механики, персонажи, сюжет. Ждём продолжения. Известно когда оно будет?
im having trouble starting the game if i try to make my character it just crashes i hope this gets fixed
а случайно нет какого-нибудь бусти у автора? раз патрион не оч доступен
Ждем продолжение игры
Может, и дождемся, кто знает?
Я знаю. Мне лень фоны дорисовывать)
Примерно на 80 процентов готово, фоны нужно доделать и перевести на инглиш
Давай на русском хотя бы хе-хе.
Особенно мне,
как ВИП персоне, за Патреон, который сдох к сожалению, сначала карты сдохли а потом и сам патреон...((Слишком запутанная и загадочная история, очень интересно понять чем дело продолжиться
On android, I'm having problems exiting the keyboard mode after I'm done with the name.
Same
Try clicking the text box. Worked for me
Furries have taken over itch
So I am a bit confused. Last couple times I've tried to play through it, I attempted to create a more brawler oriented character. I ended up with Gunn as travel companion and some reason our character comes off way to passive/soft on that route despite the means of getting on it involves 'succeeding' in a fight. Is that intended? Also there is some weirdness where when you wake up in the car it'll mention your character having burns if they didn't even go into the fire, but fought the wolf instead.
The burn and fight situation, that's a really good note. I missed it, already fixed and will be in the next update. It's normal for Gunn to be more gentle, he's not a bad character, but he has trouble holding back his anger. This will show up later. Thanks for the feedback.
Yeh Gunn is fine, just meant with how the interactions are with our character and other characters like the rabbit. Kinda ends up sounding like our character forgot the hardness and survival instincts that they was first mentioned as having in opening scene as part of living in that world. Not sure if that was intended or not though. Possible there is story elements to explain it that I haven't seen or I didn't pick up on. Or maybe I am misinterpreting/thinking about it the wrong way? Anyways Thanks Glad the bit though about the fire was helpful. I hope my asking this was ok
Waiting for the new update, i love the characters and concept... Well, i been here from the begining so this love carries on.
Nah, can you please make "Boosty" for me to donate? Since Patreon (for ReAsOnS) died and i wanna to continue support development of the gameHello Kotik. You are my favorite subscriber :D The update will not be soon... I have some text. But the game will again be divided into 2 parts. I would not want to release one part, leaving the second completely empty. I can tell you inside. The game will have a casino and a minigame, based on the player's intelligence. I think it's pretty fun.
About donations. I can only say that I am a terrible and irresponsible manager. I don't know how to advertise and manage money. The person who helped me with the patreon, convinced me to create it and helped lead it, left me.
Oh, that's great to hear! :3
(Hehe, I'm favorite)It's okay, I will wait until the end of times. Yeeeeah, my smart-ass dog finally will able to use his gigantic brain to his full potential with that MinigameOuch... Sad to hear that, but you can try on your own, it's can be a great experience for the future. If I remember correctly, it's not that hard, especially "boosty". I can ask my friends about it if you need. (And to be fair, I really don't go support for special content, it's great bonus and all, but main reason - helping out projects that I find interesting and promising)
My potatoe pc doesn't want to open the damn game, help (It says ''Does not respond'')
I love this ! I want to see how it ends so badly ! The characters are well designed, their personalities too, which make this game amazing ! The fact that there is still some action needed in the keyboard is also very nice. I don't see that so often, so it's always a pleasur to see that you can still interact with the game. Plus there is choices that matters, in a way. So yes, i enjoyed the game, and i can't wait to see the next update !
Is there any discord, patreon, or ko-fi account in which i could support the game ?
Thanks you for your amazing work, and don't give up !
Losh~
I can't get out of the splash screen where we make our character. crashes whenever I try to type the name.
Hello! I think i'm having problem with the game, i can't see any save button?
Hello. Try opening the hidden menu. This is an arrow. To the left of the portrait and to the right of the text. For some reason I can't attach a picture.
Oh yeah thanks!, is it just me that i can't enter my name anymore? Cause the first time i can enter the name, but i couldn't enter the name on the second time.
Rusty Punk haves autosave function? Because when i play im lazy dont wanna save game but wanna why game doesn't saves auto?)