I only mention the rewrite because a touch up is apparently happening once the story is finished.
I misunderstoood you. I guessed you demand specific rewrite for Dean being too normal=bad writing.
Spoiler part.
I only mention the rewrite because a touch up is apparently happening once the story is finished.
I guess i would be poetic justice if the mastermind dies because of that. However: considering Dave Vision on Path F i think the hostage/colletarel is going to die without Oswin being around.
I want to clarify: Dean on Memphis Payroll means that Dean is not part of the Mafia Clan. Memphis does not hesitated to kill Dean on Route F. Instead Dean got blackmailed by the mafia to keep and eye on Orlando and his sus frined the small hyena Dave. And Dean wanting to protect his large bear family and his brother agreed to that and started flirting with Dave,
Speculation-time !!
Path B:
1. Dean dies as hostage OR
2. Dave sacrifice himself, Dean losses his mind -> hook ending of Orlandos Vision. OR
3. Dean is on Memphis Payroll -> Everyone dies if you broke Dean's heart (Roswell Route), only one Character dies because Dean takes to much time to decide OR everyone survives (Dean Route only, because Dean backstabs Memphis instantly or convince Dom to join the other team.)
Path A:
1. Oswin dies instead of Dean after an exchange of hostages
2. Dave act as a bait, but get rescued by Dean, Oswin , Orlando and Roswell to fight the Endboss Memphis.
3. Dean is on Memphis Payroll. But Dean (and Dom?) betrays Memphis anyway.