I'll start with the good, this game has pretty art. and a fun and unique concept. The game has this special charm to it, haven't played a game as addictive as this in a long while. But it has its flaws like the game design is bad. (referring to GUI and dialogue boxes and choices), and there are various spelling errors in the game. just focus on developing your characters and improving game design and you'll have a top-notch game lol
(keeping it fast-paced is fine, but it would really shine if you fleshed out the story a bit more, you've already got an interesting concept going on.)
sorry if the review sounds a bit harsh, but this is my genuine review of it! I may edit this if I feel I worded something wrong or forgot something <3
