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Hello there! I want to start off by saying that I have played complete play throughs of Being a Dick, College Kings, and now Chasing Sunsets all in a single week. Out of all those AVN’s Chasing Sunsets 💯 has the strongest and most enrapturing story. It’s amazing and I love the depths that it makes me feel from high to low, the ride is incredible. 

-The Graphics are on point and the people and places over all look amazing with the exception of the main guy. He’s mostly ok and I think I see what your going for but something about his face just looks off. It needs more details I think just to sharpen it like everyone else’s. Everyone around him has dynamic facial expressions whereas I’d say the MC had like 2-3.  

That being said I’m rather surprised and disappointed that your roughly 50% through the story. It isn’t my story of course but as a writer playing this I just naturally feel like I’m more maybe 25% through the story. I would hope if this be the case that you have a plan for a sequel because it would definitely be wanted. 

Another low note for me on this game though is that if your truly 50% done, it feels like a rollercoaster. Out off al the AVN’s I’ve played Chasing Sunsets has the shortest chapters and they really could be extended. I see that chapter 6 is taking longer than most previous chapters I believe. Hopefully that means this chapter has more to offer than it’s shorter predecessors. 

Over all 10/10 on the story but because of the shortness of length and apparent pace id say 7.5/10 on the whole game. 

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Thank you for the feedback.   The average adult paperback novel contains about 90K-120K words.   Chasing Sunsets as of Chapter 6 contains 114K words somewhere past the halfway point.  Extrapolating through the projected end of the game, we expect to land somewhere between 170-180K words.   

Nearly every single line of dialogue has a unique render with every "short" chapter including between 1400-1800 unique and individually-posed renders.   Indeed, as of this moment there are over 10000 images in the existing content.

We're sorry the pacing and amount of content falls short of your expectations at our price point, but are gratified for the kind words regarding the story. 

I think you're underselling your wordcount by comparing it to a paperback novel. A novel spends time describing the setting and actions of it's characters. You guys are going the extra-mile and animating it. Not to mention multiple scenarios and coding.