I'm just finishing up with this game. Let me say that I have enjoyed it a ton. A lot of work has gone into the modeling and storytelling that is much more sensible than any other NSFW game I've played. I do have some criticisms that I hope some will be thought over.
There were a few lines there that just made me think, "Yeah, a dude wrote this." I'm not going to pretend like I know how to talk to women well, but some of the lines felt tactless and typical of a porn-like logic. For example, I don't hear women often talk like Maat was. But as a guy, I can see the reasoning or appeal so I can go along with them. But some of the more egregious examples of the sort of male-like objectification are giving the main character such a large dick, Michela being so large and veinous, making a note that her or her mom is unattractive, patting Nova on the head, saying someone's ass might not be the biggest when it was objectively large, and Nancy looking the same age as her daughters. Ordinary women are very attractive too, and women who look like the game models aren't going to be so oblivious to social connection. And the main character did the whole, "Oh are you sure... oh god, you're so beautiful, [character name]" a little too much. Oh, I'm also passing the part where the main character food shames Dalia? I see the point of it, but still, the dialogue could be better there. Actually the whole gym scene was kind of odd.
Also, sometimes I couldn't go back past a certain scene. And I would get this "An exception has occured" error when clicking on the hearts. I think there should be some sort of checkpoint system alongside a save option.
All in all, I enjoyed the game very much and I'll download and play the other Caribdis game as well. It's just something to think about to have more people look over and consult to formulate the best dialogue and actions possible.