This is truly a very well thought out story!! I have tried story telling but I am not the greatest at making up scenarios or filling in time spaces, but you do very well at it, imo. The characters are cool and I rlly enjoy the variety of personalities and designs. I for sure enjoy how you go more into other characters (idk if I spelt that right) lifes and problems, their thoughts and their P.O.Vs, it's very inclusive and we learn more abt them, their life, and thoughts. The humor is very interesting and doesn't bore the readers to death, I actually caught myself laughing pretty hard a few times, or genuinely just being shook. Everyone seems very relatable which gives a comforting feeling when you read and interact with other characters. Rn I am a decent portion into the story but so far it's a 10/10 ( the period part was a bit much for me, but that might just be me ) I will be updating my comment every once in awhile while I get more into the story, tysm for this great game!!! <33
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now that was a wild ride. okay I have not much to say, but this story was truly amazing, tbh when Min replied with a flirty comeback I freaked out and ran to the other side of my house.....I get nervous easily, the kiss scene shook me also, it was very quick and I was like "0o0!!!". I truly am sad that I finished it, and I hope that I am able to see more work from you in the future! This story comforts me in a sort' of way, I relate to a lot of things that the characters are going through, like growing up, figuring out my sexuality, figuring out that all the girly stuff was just not for me (I am a trans man, it's not the same situation but very similar), dealing with family problems, using humour as a way of hiding my emotions, etc.
this was truly amazing and I will remember this for a long time!!
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Okay I didn't realize there was a little extra part at the end, but my heart....kwurghetkujbwh. I love how they are like complete opposites but are so adorable together, it's nice seeing their difference in height/body/style. I enjoy how they kept their promise and even named the dog Pom. Also when Diya mentioned how the dog reminded her of Min.
This story made me laugh, tear up, run in shock, and left me in confusion. I can't explain how much this story meant to me. If you are reading this and wanna try it but aren't sure, trust me it's a banger! I would very much recommend.