This is BY FAR the best out of all of your material. The following comments are meant to be CONstructive and not DEstructive. I am enjoying all of the material I am downloading.
There needs to be a version of this with the heartbeat sound added. So far, you only have one of these games with the HB sound. That adds SO MUCH to the game. Just remember that when the knife is fully inserted, the heart would not continue to beat for very long. Also in the beginning before the knife is even inserted, her heart would be pounding in fear, not beating regularly.
We need the cut where she actually dies and is just lying there, no breathing, no moving, just the knife sticking out of her chest and blood running. We need that last big exhale and then the eyes widen and it's done.
Thank you for all of the great material! So very grateful!