This is a very interesting take on the game jam, focussing more on character development and world building rather than gameplay. Although I have found that this has made the game sacrifice player interaction leading to everything feel pre-determined which in turn makes every choice feel less important.
Apart from that, the story it tells is able to quickly and effectively portray and develop characters, making the viewer able to pick up on things laid down in the dialogue that isn't picked up by the character, creating an interesting dynamic between the viewer and the world.
While there are no major issues with this game, I was able to spot some spelling mistakes, such as misspelling Amateur as 'ameture' along with a few sentences not flowing properly. Along with this, some of the character's sprites ended up looking quite pixelated and compressed. Despite these issues, the story overall is enjoyable and has some replayability.
6/10 - Ashe L