Pros:
Very detailed story and environment, several plot twists placed nicely throughout the story to keep things from becoming stale. The main character reminds me of a few people I know overthinking and agonizing over all the wrong things and missing obvious social queues.
Cons:
The story is amazing however, the episode splits make the story a bit disjointed and shatter the immersion. The game is also huge for mobile devices. The story is engrossing but pretty linear, few more side choices would help alleviate this, odd jobs to up affection etc.
Love the work so far, hope to see more in the future.