Hey, just wanted to say you can be absolutely proud of the visuals. Absolutely stunning and cute.
The only thing bugging me was that the witch hat of the protagonist was a bit too close to the text field, sometimes hiding half a letter, but that might be a personal OCD thing. Also, I liked the "oohh" and "ahh" sound effects, but found them to be a bit too much later on.
I really liked that the protagonist was not totally passive but set up some "ground rules" of her own. Also loved Mauro and especially that charming vampire Elvis.
Looking forward to a complete version!