I remember when we were giving feedback in small groups and you were talking about your idea, now playing the game itself I really love how it turned out. I think you writing was very on point, you were able to capture all of the different characters' personalities.
The different options and potential outcomes were really engaging too, I played through to see different endings. Since it was a short play through I didn't use the save function, but if you were to develop the game further I can definitely see it being put into use.
One thing is just that I got a bit confused; I thought that the merchant/fire wanted the player to give the items to them, not like how you can summon the other entities. I figured it out tho, but if you were able to clarify that better in dialogue or choice options I think it would work out well. :)
- Elaine