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yep, the routes are very similar but very different at the same time. The theme in both routes is "communication." The pervy route does get pretty ugly for a bit but it was designed that way to force that conversation and see if these two could work shit out constructively. I wanted to show a template for how a conversation about something ugly could actually play out in a healthy way-- how two people that care about each other could actually listen to the other one and try to empathize. The pervy route, after all is said and done is probably the better written route with more twists and stuff. TBH, I just wanted to mess with the people that were playing the game for pervy reasons so that's another reason why there's such a big twist to it. Plus, let's be honest: it has more Ash and who doesn't love that?!! :p

I agree.  My partner and I had that kind of communication.  The only time we "argued" was if something was very trivial (World of Warcraft was one such thing).  But if it was important, we discussed it, analysed it, formulated options then logically chose the option that would hurt the least.  Both of us were intelligent and responsible adults.  The whole communication thing is what makes your novel so engrossing.  I believe it's why people have responded so well to it.  People are starved in this day and age for communication and understanding.  So again, job well done!

i agree and it gives an adult novel a lot more depth too when there's an actual point to it besides just trying to score

I just started getting into New Hope by your friend Blayke.  That one holds a fair bit of promise too.  He's all ready made me feel sorry for the "villain".  LOL  I'm such a sap!