I am liking the idea of the game so far. I only have 2 gripes, and they are reasonably minor, with a bit of advice. Some work needs to be done on the lighting. The shadows and lights are harsh leading to sinister feelings I do not think you intended and changing the color of hair from black to a light grey. Second, the little pop ups that say things like "She will definitely remember that" are jarring cause they imply choices I did not make. I know this is not fully done but if you do not intend to put choices there for us to make maybe take them out. Oh. And scenes where you have the "Other Guy" appear should be wearing what "Main Guy" is wearing. It really brings to focus that they are still one in the same even if one is trying to disconnect from the other. Just a fun screen writing thing. Very good game all around though. Cheers!