Waif

First impression: I thought this was going to be cringe, and then in the middle of story i knew something bad going to happened and i wanted to close it because sad and tragedy stories really affect my mood, they can make me sick, but i read it either way and it wasn't as bad as i thought it was going to be because the story was short. well first thing i hope the dev didn't create this based on something similar... Ok i think i need to stop the review here and don't write a essay based on the subject.

Good points: 

+ Art

overall: it was short and depressing(I think you achieved your goal) 8.5/10