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Found this from your reddit post, had to play it and really glad I did! First thing I like was that vast changes in each route. I love how creepy he gets in the close shots, like his eyes make me want to run away! So yeah I think Riker's the right mix of deranged and hot. Unsettling atmosphere and character, nailed.

One suggestion is that I'd like to learn more about Riker. I know the last day isn't out yet, and I don't necessarily need a deep dive into his entire history and why he's like... yknow how he is, but I would like to know more about what he does for a living, or what he likes(aside from MC lol) and dislikes. Maybe split up little tidbits behind each of the endings? That might have already been your plan lmao.

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Thank you for taking the time to check out my game! And no that's really great advice thank you. I was planning on expanding in his reasoning for the way he is in certain routes but I do agree with you with giving him a bit more substance on him as an actual person. Job, background, etc. One thing I've been meaning to do is make a character sheet so I may just have to get one whipped up as well for some additional info.