I just speedran this game, and I gotta say its oretty good. The visuals and plot both work and the spaceship is a very nice setting. There are two things I would change however- add a door for the comference room and brig, or if there already are ones, make them more prominent- it adds an element of realism when you can physically walk into it as opposed to having to teleport to it every time. Also, I would suggest delaying sexual relations with Sybil until after the birthday party, because as it is, it feels a bit sudden. Maybe have the Captain cuddle with her after the party and make the sex scenes part of a subsequent event.