Another great chapter! Still loving the wholesome way the various relationships are developing and the depth of the plot. I was not expecting the Alien reference, but it was cool to experiment with the various outcomes, and I’m very curious about the long-term consequences of some of the choices there and elsewhere. And boy, what a cliffhanger.
(spoilers below)
I wrote down a few typos and possible errors in case that’s useful (in chronological order):
- During the heist, just after the sniper headshots one of the Expendables, the door plaque behind him reads "202 LAUNGE" (should be LOUNGE).
- During Cornelius’s call with the Security Officer at 10:01, "reinforced jam" should be "jamb".
- On the beach with Dalia, after MC says "You want it so bad, don’t you?", he moans but it looks that might be supposed to be a response from Dalia?
- At the Doyle mansion, when Calypso says she "used to be feared across all the Eleven Kingdoms", should it say Elven?