One of America's great pieces of poetry, and a unique take on how to experience it through collaboration at the table. Really, really, impressive. If I had to make a suggestion I would say to make the structure clearer. (Like, I had to read it a few times before I figured out the Land would have 4 options for which family member to pick at the end of Winter.) And secondly, if the Poet gives themselves up, I feel like they should say something about it, like the eulogy for the family member, but perhaps for themselves? Not sure here.
Anyway, phenomenal game, great job.