This game has a creative story with creative writing, and the story itself was pretty horrific. Though at some parts it was wordy, and other parts had some strange word choices. It could also benefit from some proofreading, as well as maybe an occasional choice when going onto the next part (because it's so short, even just one would improve it). And because sometimes people mis-click, or read and click "next" without actually processing what was read (me), or immediately forgetting what was read (also me), the inclusion of the back button was appreciated. The background instead of a blank black screen was also nice.