I can not believe this game is only on its second build, it has so much content and it is soo good all the characters are fun and interesting and the story is really good too
Damn! Poor kids. NGL, if my favorite mentor would lay into me like that, I'd be bawling my eyes out (even as an adult, I just can't take people yelling at me). It would have been enough of a punishment for me and it would be another trauma to remember for my whole life besides nearly dying from the demon.
And I'm not going to lie that I wanna know what kind discipline Drevonia gave them, though I can imagine one thing that could be worse than Loken's brief scolding and could fit the world of Illayla, but I hope it's not that.
And I hope that we get to see them and address them in the next update as I think that a sorry and a thank you to both Loken and MC (mainly Loken though) is defo warranted.
Also I hope that the MC gets to properly explain to Loken what relationships were like before the Cascade before they get down to the naughty business. And I think that listening to Byte about just saying yes or no is just a bad idea.
Edit:
That algorithm being made during the Cascade and the demons being angered by us retrieving just one half of it makes me think, that it is an algorithm, that will allow us to fight against or even downright destroy the demons. And the MC having an AI inside his brain and not needing to breath or eat points to him being some sort of part of a plan or a weapon to destroy the demons (the algorithm being another part of it and another part of it being stored in Soulcreek).
This game is honestly beyond my expectations, I played the first update on release and the second one has just shown the effort and care your team puts in and it really pays off. The story is so immersive and intruiging. Please don't cancel this, it's one of the more unique storylines. I personally don't mind the 1/2/3 month update intervals because the story and characters are worth it.
The update was spontaneous,I can feel the emotions and the panic\Anxiety the mc was having, that's what all types of stories should have and y'all nailed it to the bat. I really can't wait for the next update but please take y'all's time patient work makes\gives awesome rewards, thank you for this amazing story y'all are doing.
I played the update yesterday but I'm still thinkin about the Blackzone stuff, I was really hyped for it before the update, and it really didn't disappoint, I'm excited to see more disturbing stuff related to them in the future because the ambiance while MC was attuning his vigor was amazing, as well as Demons of course. I'm not familiar with cosmic horror as a genre for the most part, but I've also been wondering if showing any sort of abstract imagery (instead of a black screen) when there are demons present would detract from the horror of how incomprehensible they're meant to be. The sound effects are very effective for that purpose, so I'm just wondering if seeing something disturbing but abstract or ever-shifting would contribute to the horror element in this case.
While I don't love the more fanservicey stuff, or MC being that much of a bottom, I'll admit that at this point I'd have no qualms about having sex scenes with Loken or anything of the like, specially because of their (seemingly) different perspective on sex and relationships, making the whole affair much deeper and interesting to see, so I'm excited to see where their relationship ends up going, as well as the potential misunderstandings. Other than that, I do appreciate Loken being as unique as he is, being awkward and insecure in many respects, yet still being dominant and very wise, it makes for a lovely combination that only becomes more apparent over time.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA JUST CHECKED OUT THE LATEST UPDATE AND I EXPLODEDDD!!! AMAZING! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MOREEEEEEEEE D8 THIS VN IS OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!!!!!!
That was an amazing read, my expectations were set pretty high after reading the comments, but damn it really delivered!
The writing is phenomenal, and I lol'd a considerable amount of times. All characters are really well written imo but Byte takes the cake for me.
Can't wait for the next build that's coming next week, thanks so much for your work and keep it up! This story and VN as a whole has so much potential, can't wait to see what there is in store for us.
To anyone considerating giving it a go, I highly suggest you do It grabs you during the first 10 mins and doesn't let go (played the entire thing in one sitting, and it's by no means short for a first build).
This is by far the best VN I've read. Usually there's a certain point where I quickly tap through to see the CG's but never once did I do it with this. Also build one is actually longer than expected, and it really gets you invested. I have fallen in love with Loken and can't wait to see where things go.
this story was actualy really interesting and gave me actualy a few hour of reading. Would defenitly think to throw money at this project if there is a patreon that open some day.
really good work! thank you so much for choosing for the mc to 1. actually have a personalty, and 2.not be the copy paste white twink that every other human fvn mc is.
Reading about the Demons, I can't help but think of the Reapers from Mass Effect. I suspect that (if they are technology), they can emit some kind of radiation that affects the minds of living things.
The blackrunners reminded me of the stalkers in the s.t.a.l.k.e.r video game series and that made me love it even more as I really like those games. I enjoyed every minute of it and can't wait for the next update and spend more time with Loken but also find the answer to all those questions that came up, I have my theories but I have to wait.
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This VN is amazing!!
Thank you for the efforts and can't wait for the next update !!!
I can not believe this game is only on its second build, it has so much content and it is soo good all the characters are fun and interesting and the story is really good too
when Loken gonna pin me down and do what he wants...... i cant stop thinking a big alpha husky pin me down 🥰
Think this is already one of my favorite VN's
oh dear, that second build did give me all the cosmic horror creeps.
I love it, also, a certain good doggo already has my hearth.
Damn! Poor kids. NGL, if my favorite mentor would lay into me like that, I'd be bawling my eyes out (even as an adult, I just can't take people yelling at me). It would have been enough of a punishment for me and it would be another trauma to remember for my whole life besides nearly dying from the demon.
And I'm not going to lie that I wanna know what kind discipline Drevonia gave them, though I can imagine one thing that could be worse than Loken's brief scolding and could fit the world of Illayla, but I hope it's not that.
And I hope that we get to see them and address them in the next update as I think that a sorry and a thank you to both Loken and MC (mainly Loken though) is defo warranted.
Also I hope that the MC gets to properly explain to Loken what relationships were like before the Cascade before they get down to the naughty business. And I think that listening to Byte about just saying yes or no is just a bad idea.
Edit:
That algorithm being made during the Cascade and the demons being angered by us retrieving just one half of it makes me think, that it is an algorithm, that will allow us to fight against or even downright destroy the demons. And the MC having an AI inside his brain and not needing to breath or eat points to him being some sort of part of a plan or a weapon to destroy the demons (the algorithm being another part of it and another part of it being stored in Soulcreek).
Sounds like a decent theory. Then the MC and Byte are "supposed to" find the two parts. That explains why Byte felt the station to be so familiar.
We only know the servers seem to store an algorithm. But also a lot of data. So is it a weapon, or an ai maybe?
Or, maybe the MC ist part of a civilization-reboot program and the servers contain all information about technology.
I Jenually cried in fear with the kid my core was shooketh.
When is the next update coming??????????????????????????
usually every 1.5-2 months. The creator usually states when the next one comes out.
OH MA LORD THANK YOU DEAR LORD IN HEAVEN FOR THIS GIFT!
I really like this Vn, the storyline is amazing and unique. I can't wait for the next update!!!
OMFG this is a really amazing vn, i'm loving the story soo far it's soo intriguing. Finished readin' today, i can't wait to find out more.
Hope ye guys continue workin' on this VN, ye guys did a really amazing job here.
This game is honestly beyond my expectations, I played the first update on release and the second one has just shown the effort and care your team puts in and it really pays off. The story is so immersive and intruiging. Please don't cancel this, it's one of the more unique storylines. I personally don't mind the 1/2/3 month update intervals because the story and characters are worth it.
Pick Violence
Pick Violence but feel bad
Pick Backflip
This made me laugh.
The update was spontaneous,I can feel the emotions and the panic\Anxiety the mc was having, that's what all types of stories should have and y'all nailed it to the bat. I really can't wait for the next update but please take y'all's time patient work makes\gives awesome rewards, thank you for this amazing story y'all are doing.
I played the update yesterday but I'm still thinkin about the Blackzone stuff, I was really hyped for it before the update, and it really didn't disappoint, I'm excited to see more disturbing stuff related to them in the future because the ambiance while MC was attuning his vigor was amazing, as well as Demons of course. I'm not familiar with cosmic horror as a genre for the most part, but I've also been wondering if showing any sort of abstract imagery (instead of a black screen) when there are demons present would detract from the horror of how incomprehensible they're meant to be. The sound effects are very effective for that purpose, so I'm just wondering if seeing something disturbing but abstract or ever-shifting would contribute to the horror element in this case.
While I don't love the more fanservicey stuff, or MC being that much of a bottom, I'll admit that at this point I'd have no qualms about having sex scenes with Loken or anything of the like, specially because of their (seemingly) different perspective on sex and relationships, making the whole affair much deeper and interesting to see, so I'm excited to see where their relationship ends up going, as well as the potential misunderstandings. Other than that, I do appreciate Loken being as unique as he is, being awkward and insecure in many respects, yet still being dominant and very wise, it makes for a lovely combination that only becomes more apparent over time.
No need to breathe? No problem! It's perfect for oral gratification~
No need to eat? Great! It leaves the pipes clean for anal fun at any time of the day~
And all this talk about ownership? Bring it on! If Loken wants to claim us, I know a method of tying that is far more sufficient than a chain~
you naughty naughty
Hey :p I'm not the 1ne designing a perfect cum vessel xD
There's a channel in the discord you'll probably like lol
Not a part of discord :3 guess xa'll gonna be exposed to my depraved thoughts xp
Waaaah! "O_O This last update was amazing! \>o</ SoulCreek has easily joined the ranks of Adastra and Far Beyond The World! Absolutely incredible!
I personally wouldn’t call Far Beyond The World incredible.
It's got everything I could ask for UwU but each to his own ;)
Amazing
great chapter, keep it up.
thank you for this novel
Awesomw update and Vn Looking forwerd to next days with loken.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA JUST CHECKED OUT THE LATEST UPDATE AND I EXPLODEDDD!!!
AMAZING! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MOREEEEEEEEE D8
THIS VN IS OUT OF THIS WORLD!!!!!!!!
20/10!!!!!!!!! UWÚ
10/10, This is probably my favorite VN right now. Love the writing and I can't wait to see where the story goes!
10/10 havent felt horror like this since echo
Incredibly good, the story keeps you engaged and the characters are very well written. The only con I have is waiting for the next version!
Ahh crap....I had to start a new game. I couldn't continue from my save point.
literally just came in my pants
It's really amazing story, everything looks and works well
NWE VERSION ONLY ONE HOUR LEFT! 🤸♂️
That was an amazing read, my expectations were set pretty high after reading the comments, but damn it really delivered!
The writing is phenomenal, and I lol'd a considerable amount of times. All characters are really well written imo but Byte takes the cake for me.
Can't wait for the next build that's coming next week, thanks so much for your work and keep it up! This story and VN as a whole has so much potential, can't wait to see what there is in store for us.
To anyone considerating giving it a go, I highly suggest you do It grabs you during the first 10 mins and doesn't let go (played the entire thing in one sitting, and it's by no means short for a first build).
This is by far the best VN I've read. Usually there's a certain point where I quickly tap through to see the CG's but never once did I do it with this. Also build one is actually longer than expected, and it really gets you invested. I have fallen in love with Loken and can't wait to see where things go.
I really like it. kept me interested it's a cool story, it's cute and funny. I'll be waiting for the next update.
this story was actualy really interesting and gave me actualy a few hour of reading. Would defenitly think to throw money at this project if there is a patreon that open some day.
wow so good, I'm really going to enjoy this story!
That was one heck of a first build! Looking forward to the rest of the story!
I love the story and keep up the good work🥰🥰🥰
Just found this gem and gotta say the writing is excellent. Will you possibly be doing a patreon page?
really good work! thank you so much for choosing for the mc to 1. actually have a personalty, and 2.not be the copy paste white twink that every other human fvn mc is.
true
So much potential in this, will be definitely checking in the next update. 5/5 ^_^
Reading about the Demons, I can't help but think of the Reapers from Mass Effect. I suspect that (if they are technology), they can emit some kind of radiation that affects the minds of living things.
The blackrunners reminded me of the stalkers in the s.t.a.l.k.e.r video game series and that made me love it even more as I really like those games. I enjoyed every minute of it and can't wait for the next update and spend more time with Loken but also find the answer to all those questions that came up, I have my theories but I have to wait.