Demo was awesome, has a lot going for it.
For others looking at this comment:
[SPOILERS AHEAD DON'T READ FURTHER IF YOU HAVEN'T PLAYED]
Things I liked:
The eye. I really like the idea of having an item that changes your perception of the world at any time. I started using it in every area to see if I could find something hidden. I think you should really build off this in the other areas.
Really liked the music, especially in the 2nd dream section where you find the computer password. Beautiful stuff, and contrasts some of the more horrific settings.
The art style is creepy, jagged, and pixelated enough to leave a lot to the imagination. Pretty cool.
Dodge rolling.
Things I didn't like:
THAT FUCKING JUMPSCARE LOUD NOISE IN THE DREAM HOW DARE YOU
Suggestions:
I really like the dodge rolling and would be interested to see more complex enemies to fight where dodging would be more necessary. Though then again, I'm totally okay with the focus not being on combat at all in this game, seems like the creepy dialogue and settings are the real strong point of the demo.
Spell/grammar check! A few typos in the dialogue are noticeable, pulls you out of the experience (which can be pretty immersive at times)
Other than that, keep it up!